Courageously, the mother used her sharp nails to climb the softwood tree trying her best to conserve her babies' protection. the mother was getting exhausted after all the climbing the babies were slipping of their mother back but trying to holding on for dear life but suddenly two of the babies so something that gave than a fright it was an interesting thing it was a mice the mother hurried up the tree and get their as soon as the mice sees them they went at the top of the tree and went to sleep hiding behind a big leaf.
Ka pai Fahtma I liked the describing words you used in your writing. I wonder if the babies can walk on their own. It looks like they're big enough too. Or maybe there is a predator near by. What do you think? Next time maybe you could add some more full stops and other punctuation?
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